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My Sweet Old Cat

I found her in the morning laying, in her secret place. Oh, it was hard to see; my tears were falling and I was full of dread, I sent a prayer upwards with a wishful plea. My beautiful girl was dying! And I was shattered, through a haze of tears I kissed her head; and I held her in my arms till her last breath, whispering my love and pressed her to my heart. We stayed this way for a very, very long time, I sang her a lullaby. Oh, she had been a cat sublime; later, I buried her in her favorite place in the garden, I have no idea how long I sat there weeping; hours, hours, hours . . . returning for days, and still I go there to weep . . . ________________________________ October 20, 2020 Poetry/Verse/My Sweet Love Copyright Protected, ID 10-1296-601-20 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, The Gem The Slipped Through the Cracks sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 02/10/2021 First Place

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Date: 2/11/2021 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" story/write. Some pets are much more than just a pet. Some are sent from heaven. I know how this feels. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Constance La France
Date: 2/12/2021 9:09:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, the comment and the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/10/2021 6:59:00 PM
Thanks to the contest, have seen this beautiful tribute to your pet, a child, a family member. Congrats on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2021 6:42:00 AM
Seeker, thanks for the congrats and comment, it is my cat I mourn to this day _Constance
Date: 2/10/2021 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement, loosing a much loved pet is so difficult.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2021 4:27:00 PM
Joanna, thanks for the congratulations, it was a great loss to leave my beloved cat, I still grief her passing to this day, it never diminishes, she meant so much to me _Constance
Date: 2/10/2021 1:19:00 PM
Nice to discover this awesome poem, Constance:-) I can't believe this has no replies. Congrats for placing in my contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2021 4:25:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to spotlight this forgotten poem, and for my great placement, I have no idea why it never got any comments, it is a mystery to me, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

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