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Loud Dreams, Silent Screams

This girl, the girl of my dreams. The causer of my soul’s silent screams. Bringing my heart and brain to nothing but a jumble. Thoughts, emotions, memories, all having one giant rumble. Feelings I need to express with more than just a mumble I’ll scream, I’ll shout You’re all I want to think about. A smile that takes me to paradise Immeasurable time lost in those stunning blue eyes True beauty unmatched even by the infinite skies The type of girl I could talk to until sunrise You’re the perfect girl for me, inside and out. Enthralled by your incomparable bliss Captivated from the very first glance Emotions I could never dismiss I should’ve made you mine, when I had the chance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/13/2013 6:29:00 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone. Any tips on what I could work on for my next one? I really would not mind some constructive criticism on any of my poems.
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:46:00 AM
Hi Alex, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:23:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats, Alex
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Date: 12/12/2013 12:36:00 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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