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Lost-Yet So Complete

Can your eyes see , Whats so deep. Can your heart feel, The murmur, That reaps. The gravitation towards, Silence in your speech. Pulls me in a direction, So out of reach, Which awakens, this feeling Lost yet so complete... The caress in your eyes, Without being touched. The kiss in your voice, Disguised, in such lust. The magnetism in your aura, Leaves me visibly, flushed. Without uttering a word, Your thoughts call, my name, Whispered in the dusk. Catching each grain... Your alluring smile, Is a thief in destined defeat. You have captured apart of me. Lost,................yet so complete.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2013 5:43:00 AM

- This is a poem that I am glad that I read .... well done Cherie !! - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/9/2013 6:12:00 PM

Hi anne,, thanks so much for your lovely comment:) means alot 2 me thanks...~<3~ cherie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2013 11:46:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Very descriptive and expressive..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/8/2013 5:12:00 PM

Sincere thanks for your comment sara,,, appreciate your kindness & glad u pick this 1 to:0) your welcome & enjoy your day....

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/7/2013 11:54:00 PM

Ah, how the heart blinds us, yet shows us the way...wonderful job!

Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/8/2013 8:32:00 AM

Certainly does drake, always a pleasure, reading your comments....thankyou ~<3~ cherie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2013 1:21:00 PM

I love it, the Art is in the Contradictions.

Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/7/2013 2:49:00 PM

Thanks so much rick, so true it is.....really appreciate your warm comment:)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/7/2013 11:57:00 AM

This is amazing Cherry.Top notch poem from you my dear.Big applause!

Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/7/2013 2:44:00 PM

Hey m,,,, thanks so much for dropping a comment:) always happy to see you, thanks xxoo

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/7/2013 7:44:00 AM

It sounds like a place I'd want to be. Life is never perfect, but to feel desired like you've conveyed, sound close to perfect to me. Warm Smiles, Connie

Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/7/2013 2:43:00 PM

Warm smiles back:) thanks so much connie for your kind comment,,,, very sweet,,, thankyou

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/7/2013 5:10:00 AM

I was trying my best to describe what I just read here. It took me to a place where I didn't want to come back from. I love that feeling. ..beautifully written!!!

Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/7/2013 2:40:00 PM

Wow ink thanks so much...thats such a lovely comment. Really appreciate your kind words....makes me :) thankyou...