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Lost Silhouettes

*FICTION - lost love song Maybe, I didn’t know what you needed In all of the things I missed Maybe I didn’t read between lines Every time that we kissed Maybe, I couldn’t reach you beyond the wall Protecting you from taking a fall Maybe I didn’t look to see beyond Those troubles, when I had no wand But, the magic was already there Love emanating around us everywhere The stars the moon, couldn’t be more bright Our dance of silhouettes through the night Maybe we learned from a time we lost Maybe it was all worth the cost I still move on wishing you the best As my wishes, bring my heart to rest That magic that was already there, Casted wisdom with lessons, how to care And as I see the falling stars in the skies I remember best about us with my eyes Heidi Sands 7/9/19

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Date: 7/10/2019 8:59:00 PM
Your use of the word 'maybe' really makes this lyric sing. No 'maybe' about that---DEFINITELY! Nicely done, Heidi! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/11/2019 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Gershon. I appreciate your support! Have a nice day :)
Date: 7/10/2019 11:10:00 AM
"I still move on wishing you the best" So nice line and poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Abdullah :)
Date: 7/10/2019 10:44:00 AM
A lovely poem - inspired me to write one for my personal file.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2019 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Sunlite. I love to hear that it was inspiring in that way. Have a nice day :)
Date: 7/10/2019 5:34:00 AM
tender and romantic writing that doesn't leave the heart untouched dearest, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios :) Have a nice day.
Date: 7/10/2019 2:16:00 AM
Lovey one Heidi...simply lovely...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Arturo :)
Date: 7/9/2019 10:33:00 PM
This is such a beautiful love poem. I love the 3rd stanza especially...and the magic is definitely here!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne. I appreciate your feedback :)
Date: 7/9/2019 10:19:00 PM
Lovely Heidi, Wouldn't it be wonderful if life's magic lasted forever rather than just a moment?
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. . I suppose magic can retturn in many ways :)
Date: 7/9/2019 7:57:00 PM
The magic still shining bright...Beautiful write Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/9/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)

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