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Trees surround me in the dark forest Oh I am lost, please come find me There is no moon above the moss I rest It is damp and cold so steadily Visions are forming on the bark Oh I am lost, please come find me My heart is pounding in the dark The birds are not leading my way Visions are forming on the bark I am touched by branches, scars to stay Release me from this endless maze The birds are not leading the way Noisy trees crack and blow sideways I must find the way to be free Release me from this endless maze I will sleep with the flowers I see Trees surround me in the dark forest I must find my way to be free There is no moon, above the moss I rest Heidi Sands 9/30/17

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Barry Stebbings

Date: 10/1/2017 3:38:00 PM

Nicely visualised dramatic piece, Heidi. // Barry

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2017 3:48:00 PM

Thank you Barry :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/1/2017 7:27:00 AM

Nicely written, Heidi ... an absorbing read ...

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2017 3:48:00 PM

Thank you Probir :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/1/2017 7:01:00 AM

I think this is excellent, Heidi. I have never been lost in that way and I surely do not want to be after reading your poem! Happy Sunday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2017 7:03:00 AM

Hi Mike. I am glad you haven't been lost in that way! Thank you for your comment. Happy Sunday ! :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/30/2017 3:22:00 PM

Very nicely penned Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2017 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2017 3:12:00 PM

Life can be like a maze...lost all too often

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2017 4:11:00 PM

Yes, Tim..it can be like a maze. Many phases lost , then finding the way again :) Thank you for your comment.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/30/2017 11:50:00 AM

Very well written Terzanelle--seems like a good place to get lost--but no moon and noisy trees could be troublesome--sun is on the way--best for a win!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2017 12:58:00 PM

Thanks so much Vijay! Hope you are having a great day :)