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Lost In the Darkness

As I fell to the ground My heart fluttered and began to pound Thinking of my legs being bound What has happened to me Why are my legs not functioning Where are we It is to dark to see My boyfriend says he doesn’t know But he’ll grab me and drag me pull and tow He promises to me he’ll never let go He tells me he knows a way To make it through until the day Leaving me in complete dismay Wondering what his actions will bring He finds a cave next to a spring My heart felt as if it could sing We waited there for the sun to rise When it came my legs untied Drifting into each others eyes The evil darkness we had defied by: Virginia Frayer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2011 4:19:00 PM
a lovely read, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:11:00 PM
Very creative and expressive write, Virginia
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Date: 2/4/2011 2:14:00 PM
This is a decent submission with some good descriptiveness and appropriate rhyming. I enjoyed reading this.
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