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Lost In a Melody

Grass is underneath my bare feet Soft blades touching toes Vast sky above is like an ocean White clouds of ships pass by Others stretch like sails to be seen All different sizes, changing The bird keeps on singing Singing all day in the woods Hidden in blankets of branches A warbling melody is heard And when I walk trying to see it, It is heard from another place Then, I stand still in the middle Of a melody that circles around me It carries on and on through the air Beyond every thought I have An unreachable, endless song With each breath of my life in the center Heidi Sands 7/31/19

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Date: 8/2/2019 1:47:00 PM
Enchanting poem- melody of a admirable soul dear, Heidi! Hugs xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/2/2019 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios! Enjoy the day! hugs :)
Date: 8/1/2019 10:14:00 PM
This poem shows a reverence and delight for the forest, and the melody Heidi. Nice one.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2019 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Caren :)
Date: 8/1/2019 9:43:00 PM
Pretty words here - you clearly show your delight in birdsong. So did the poet Rumi. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/2/2019 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Matthew ! I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 8/1/2019 9:04:00 AM
Oh, this poem that so embraces the wonder of nature just glows with its own aura Heidi! I loved the serenity contained. Beautifull! Nite xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/1/2019 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Connie! I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 8/1/2019 7:16:00 AM
A blessing to hear such melodies in nature..a charming write, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/1/2019 7:31:00 AM
Yes, I have always enjoyed hearing the birds. Interesting, this is the first one that never stops singing. Non stop. So, this bird has taken a bit of quietness away here. I am not sure what kind it is yet. Thank you for your kind comment ,:)
Date: 8/1/2019 7:00:00 AM
Very powerful. Well done, Kai
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/1/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Kai :)
Date: 7/31/2019 7:41:00 PM
how this poem sing with much charm, heidi... well penned!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/31/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Nette :)

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