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Lost In a Box

Yesterday's direction's have swiftly taken flight like a blue jay's flight. Turning to the right to find my way out I became bewildered. Light from life filtered thru to hope from a small pin hole in the box. But that was not enough to lift the darkness surrounding me. The sound of thunder heightened my turning left back home. October 13, 2020

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Date: 10/17/2020 11:51:00 AM
- Survival can be a struggle ... but often it's not about surviving ... it's about living ... - A great winning poem, congratulations Dietra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dietra Reid
Date: 10/17/2020 4:41:00 PM
Thank you for your kind encouraging words. Take care
Date: 10/16/2020 11:13:00 AM
Dietra, congratulations for your fine win in Silent One's contest with your compelling poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dietra Reid
Date: 10/17/2020 4:40:00 PM
Thank you so much. Take care of yourself.
Date: 10/15/2020 6:37:00 PM
Very interesting write Dietra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Dietra Reid
Date: 10/17/2020 4:39:00 PM
Thank you very much. Take care
Date: 10/15/2020 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Dietra Reid
Date: 10/17/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thank you I appreciate your picking my poem and sponsoring the contest. Have a good weekend. Stay safe.

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