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Lost Hero

Darling without you feels like hell Please come home safe Until..... ------------------------------------------ Line 1 has one word (the title). Line 2 has two words that describe the title. Line 3 has three words that tell the action. Line 4 has four words that express the feeling Line 5 has one word which recalls the title.

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Date: 8/24/2014 3:12:00 PM
great teach. thank you for explaining the style. i am new to this and i love to learn.
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:51:00 AM
short but sweet, simple words but meaningful..i so love it, Judy! thank you :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 5:44:00 PM
I like how you chose a simple form for hero and did it so well!
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Date: 8/19/2014 10:09:00 AM
JUdy, I like this form. Short and sweet, good luck in the contest
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