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Have been searching for my beloved poetic muse, he left me while I slept; and since then I have wept, have looked in all his favorite green forest hues. Without his whispers I have no inspiration to write, I feel very alone; with sorrow to the bone, I need his stimulus so words and poetry can take flight. Without inspiration I am unable to draw or paint, my hand just holds the brush; and my heart feels a hush. oh, come back and I will not utter a complaint. I must accept that our journey has ended, oh, miss how you mutter; to make my wings flutter, in time my shattered heart will be mended. Then, at dawn one day I felt a poetic spark, he woke me with a kiss; to fill my soul with bliss, brushing tears away- he led me from the dark. __________________________ August 4, 2020 Poetry/Enclosed Rhyme/Lost Copyright Protected, ID 20-1275-592-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the PREMIER contest, Be Inspired sponsor, Regina Riddle Fourth Place

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Date: 8/17/2020 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/poem. I love your ending. Glad "he woke me with a kiss;" and that "to fill my soul with bliss," You are a beautiful writer. Enjoy your win and day.................
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Date: 8/17/2020 5:49:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and compliment on my poem, I love that line too _Constance
Date: 8/15/2020 7:17:00 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance! GREAT approach! Janice
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Date: 8/17/2020 5:49:00 PM
Janice, thanks for the congrats and the compliment _Constance
Date: 8/15/2020 4:50:00 AM
Your inspirations always inspire me, dear Constance!!! Congrats on your top win. Love and prayers sent your way! God bless you
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Date: 8/17/2020 5:50:00 PM
Gina, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement, appreciate _Constance
Date: 8/4/2020 2:25:00 PM
You are surrounded by spirits with many talents who would just love to be your muse if you opened your mind to them! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:04:00 PM
Rico, thanks so much for visiting and commenting, appreciate _Constance