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As I open my mouth, I hum along Lord, u r my first song; I awaken in the morn; I thank you that I was born; Oh! Lord, Oh Lord... U R my first song ~ A robin chirps; A squirrel chatters; Grasshoppers hops does it matter; Crickets rubbing legs, clicks in praise; Let everything that has breath praise ye the Lord; Lift up your voices and be heard; ~ open my mouth, I hum along Lord, u r my first song; I awaken in the morn; I thank you that I was born; Oh! Lord, Oh Lord... U R my first song 6/6/19 written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2019© From Anthology “ Intermittent Praises”

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Date: 6/6/2019 7:11:00 AM
This reminds me of Gitanjali- A song offering to God written by the famous Indian poet Rabindranath Tagore. After reading his words of praise to God, it is this again that appealed to me to such level. Great work !!! Loved it.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 6/6/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Swetha, Much appreciated...James

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