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Lord, I Pantoum You

Lord, I pantoum you on this day, another day just like the rest. I simply woke and ate today; kept warm and dry, in comfort, dressed. Another day, just like the rest. I worked and played, then soundly slept. Kept warm and dry, in comfort, dressed. I saw and heard, ran, walked and stepped. I worked and played, then soundly slept. I tasted, smelled and keenly felt. I saw and heard, ran, walked and stepped; with my concerns, I calmly dealt. I tasted, smelled and keenly felt. I loved, was loved back in return. With my concerns, I calmly dealt; a plain old day from stem to stern. I loved, was loved back in return. Forgive me, Lord, you've spoiled me! A plain old day from stem to stern? Oh, how ungrateful can I be? Forgive me, Lord, you've spoiled me. Your miracle of life I hold. Oh, how ungrateful can I be? You've blessed me with your gifts untold. Your miracle of life I hold! I simply woke and ate today? You've blessed me with your gifts untold. Lord, I pantoum you on this day. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Lord, I Pantoum You Sponsor: James Edward Lee, Sr. Judged: 06/16/2018

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Date: 7/2/2018 5:52:00 PM
How ungrateful others, but you my dear friend...don't think so. Congrats on how simply but deeply expressed. I thank you for unselfish way you encourage us new and old time writers. Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/5/2018 8:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Barbara, for your visit, congrats and uplifting and supportive comments. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/21/2018 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win! Beautiful as always.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/16/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Sandra..He is great and yes He spoil us with his love. . Wonderful write .. Hugs Eve ~' *
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/16/2018 5:09:00 PM
Congrats on first place!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Sandra
Date: 6/16/2018 4:57:00 PM
Amazing how life is beautiful when we stop taking it for granted. Well penned, Sandra. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Sandra
Date: 4/29/2018 8:49:00 PM
Love the uniqueness of this one, Sandra, and the title really caught my attention which is very important in a write. Very excellent job with a difficult form.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2018 2:55:00 PM
Hi, Rhoda, thanks for the visit and nice comments about my poem. Actually, the contest sponsor required us to use that title, so I can't take credit for it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/23/2018 5:08:00 PM
Well done, Sandra. GL on contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/25/2018 10:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line. Hugs, Sandra

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