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Looking For You - My Son of Late

I received a call That made my heart fall They said, you passed away I did not know what to say I stood up but I fell With urges only to YELL I stood, but could not walk My whole being went into shock Where, oh where have you gone? I keep looking for you From dusk to dawn My shoes are tattered My clothes are shorn Do I have to wait? And believe in faith? Do I have to wait? Until I reach heaven’s gate? To see and meet you again As it says in the “good” book? And then I can give up the task Of always having to look…. Written by mjmankasingh august 2010

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Date: 1/19/2018 10:42:00 AM
Mintra, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/6/2018 4:46:00 AM
Great first post Mintra.. Welcome to poetry soup...
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Date: 1/4/2018 2:01:00 PM
Your poem seeks an answer many people would like to know...Best to love as much as you can while alive...A good conscious poem...All blessings Mintra
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