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daddy long legs climbing the wall like me when bored AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Posted on June 9, 2018

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/9/2018 8:05:00 PM

Your haiku reminds me of an encounter I had with a daddy long legs when I was about three years old. One of them crawled down my back under my blouse and I was terrorized. I know they are harmless creatures but they still give me the creeps. A cool hajku Line. : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/10/2018 8:40:00 AM

I hope this doesn't give you nightmares, Connie. It you do, it helps to continue your dream in order to become acquainted with your new eight-legged friend... create your own version of Alice in Wonderland. Sweet dreams!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/9/2018 2:37:00 PM

Gosh we are both writing about creepy crawlies Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/9/2018 2:44:00 PM

'Tis the season... Line xx