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Lonely

(04/05/2005) – Acrostic Poem (L.O.N.E.L.Y) Lying in this room by myself Only my heart beat I hear Never felt this emptiness before Exact silence in my thoughts Like I’m nobody You make me lose me

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Date: 8/15/2011 5:56:00 AM
We learn a lot about ourselves when we are lonely 7th!!!
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Date: 6/20/2011 2:34:00 PM
Good strong write!!! very well constructed and worded...luv Michael
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:14:00 AM
Can relate to the feelings of "emptiness," Dinda. Hope you never let anyone make you lose yourself. Very moving acrostic. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:43:00 AM
this is a great acrostic poem, but the last paragraph, doesn't make sense. just a suggestion mind you, but lose would make more sense
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