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its not the first line that makes it its the ones that follow that shapes it

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Date: 9/8/2009 1:09:00 PM
Interesting perspective, giving the reader something to ponder. So much depth in just two lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Karen
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