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Like Ice --- THE WALTZ

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Like Ice --- THE WALTZ

"Black Ice"

Sorrow flows from the first sunrise 
Eyes deeper than winter and rainfall
A painful combination never felt before 
At core death awaits
   - laughing while she begs for clemency!
In her eyes, fault is found in every sunset
   - after coming down from cloud nine.
Impossible to move --- her body stiffen
That very moment, A precious Waltz - Expired!
Coldplay and winter mist set in 
Ruins of love clinch an endless echo 
  - taunting the very merry memory.
The auditory sensation of broken trust 
   - stride across the way.
Icing every thought in a sullen, cold rink. 
She fell - She crumbled 
  - In a world where hope once existed 

Today, she will sway alone without a lullaby
In a room with no warmth 
One time a sweet symphony, now a sour moon 
 At last, a different tune begins to fiddle
As she grooms the icicles in her room.
On every mid-moon, she stares and stares
  towards the old shriveled lipstick on his pillow 
Unseen coldness, unsatisfied, incomplete tears
She can feel the complete braille of hate 
--- cascade around the emptiness

Throughout her poise frostbite travels in
Midnight Summer dreams are near an end
Autumn bones covered by winter sleet 
A deadly force condemns all because of one 

Lost years crumbled like an avalanche 
Way deep down inside....... 
She paints the rain like no other heartache
Leaving winter residue behind every step
"Black Ice" sits close to the cold canvas on her pale

If you seek closely, she is there 
Immobilized in a waltz, in a waltz, in a waltz

Never to linger or trust 
The "HE" that spoke of love, then melted away

~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 10/12/2017 9:37:00 AM
Linda you are missed!
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Date: 10/10/2017 6:23:00 AM
Life and love,wonderful but sad journey,your words speaks volumes,great write Linda,oxox
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:17:00 PM
Very long time, no see, Linda. ARe you ok? Message me in FB sometime!
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:07:00 PM
Written very well..love the imagery n the structure
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Date: 8/31/2017 6:15:00 PM
Poet Destroyer, this poem is beautiful. i can see all the action going on as I read this poem. She is broken hearted and sadden. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/31/2017 6:54:00 AM
Hi, Linda, read this through a few times. Not being a great poet myself. I first saw Mother Nature in all her moods. Then I saw an unrequited love, Then A woman scorned and rejected looking back on her life. Maybe all totally wrong but I still loved this great write. A definite 7 in the old days. God Bless. D.
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Date: 8/31/2017 12:37:00 AM
Dear poet destroyer, I ve joined ps this year and have read alot of your poems, have seen alot of comments of yours on other peoples id, It was later that I come to know that you no longer post poems, can you do me a favour, I m 15 and I ve recently started poetry, can you plz read my poems and tell me how they are, my family don t like poetry, and yeah this poems of yours is again really beautiful
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Date: 8/31/2017 12:51:00 AM
I'd be glad to, give me until tomorrow
Date: 8/21/2017 12:10:00 PM
Wordplay ...A game
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Date: 8/17/2017 11:46:00 PM
Warmth keeps your words awake Nothing from the original do I take Do you think your life for goodness sake? Or pray your soul of black ice to take? I am just commenting. Good writing.
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Date: 8/17/2017 11:15:00 PM
It was ok...u r talented for sure but raw...lotta cliche but potent wordplay...tighten...and show IT
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Date: 8/4/2017 10:33:00 AM
Wow. So deep and touching.
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:31:00 PM
The emotions I can feel the loneliness, the tears, and the longings. Express great emotions here. Great writings. God bless.
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Date: 7/11/2017 1:01:00 PM
wow ...
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Date: 6/29/2017 7:53:00 PM
oh dear! feels as if I can feel it... nice one Linda
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Date: 6/24/2017 7:22:00 PM
Emotionally provoking and cause for reflection of a few waltz's in my own past. It brought forth imagery that guided the emotional journey, nicely done. :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 4:02:00 PM
This poem set the tone o sheer emotion it is a stunner you always are a top your poetry game. brilliant poem piece. Matt
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Date: 5/24/2017 1:18:00 PM
Awesome poem!
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Date: 5/22/2017 2:42:00 PM
PD-- I'm trying to reach you to check to see if you have a way to contact Billy the Kidster. If you have his phone number please call him ASAP. He's in a bad way and I'm worried about his blood pressure and heart rate! He needs to talk to someone -- I mean a friend!--- and to also go to the hospital. I'm very worried! - cyndi
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Date: 5/15/2017 5:24:00 AM
Too powerful.... hehehe... I love the figure of speeches.. Pls continue writing.. PS: if thou wilt...check.. my poetry...tnx
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Date: 5/13/2017 4:51:00 PM
Hey you long time no read... so I'm back on here check out my new writings tell me what you think thanks you...
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Date: 5/13/2017 10:45:00 AM
An awesome write Lynda - makes the reader sad. I admire your way to words - the flow and meaningfulness, the imagery. You are talented, indeed! It is a treat to read your work. Love -Mohammad
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Date: 5/12/2017 4:31:00 PM
Missing you lots. Love Always, armand.
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Date: 4/18/2017 1:21:00 PM
Where are you Linda? Hope everything is okay.
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Date: 4/13/2017 12:21:00 AM
I feel your sadness in this piece Linda. You express it as only you can. You have a way to make every word hit directly at the heart. One of your finest. Blessings Carl
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Date: 4/8/2017 8:41:00 PM
This is sensuous, imaginative, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. The words are magical and beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. The imagery and shear beauty of your words are impressively seasoned by a extensive vocabulary and fill the page with their magic pallet of colors. Emile.
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