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Remnants of Tears

Love is the greatest gift that a human heart can receive. Yet, like any miracle, it requires that you believe. Lust ignites passion's flame within hearts numbed by neglect. And places you in danger of losing your self-respect. Gathering remnants of tears, doubt scuttles a hopeful heart. And it is devastating watching your dreams fall apart. Betrayal's like being stabbed, over and over again. And your heart’s bleeding inside, unaccustomed to such pain. Feelings of uncertainty converge; to obscure your fate. And the dark specter of fear turns elation; into hate. (Quatrain) 9/5/2015

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Date: 3/13/2018 2:57:00 PM
I particularly loved the lines "And your heart’s bleeding inside unaccustomed to such pain." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/13/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/7/2015 9:05:00 AM
Faithful hearts can avoid this devastation, sadly many possess foolish hearts. Very well written emotive piece Emile.
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Richard, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 9/7/2015 8:25:00 AM
Emile, your write is full of truths, love can be beautiful but can be cruel , wonderfully penned and thanks for visiting my poem, river ~~
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Broken, your visits are always welcome. Emile.

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