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Like a Windsong She Was Gone

At best a memory flutter alone my love whisked away before the new dawn a thief had come so silent, unheard where mercy deserted her soft spoken word Upon the new day where time would not cease a truth of nevermore lay tears on my cheek mercy I cry out thorns at my side death had come alone why must I die...

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Date: 8/3/2016 8:39:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem – it is well written and thought provoking - but the idiom was not included in the poem. I only had room for 10 places in the premium contest of 35 entries. Thanks for entering the contest and I will check out some more of your work!
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/26/2016 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Jesse /// Hope you enjoy my painted words. Love & Light

Book: Shattered Sighs