Lighting a Candle - Word Acrostic

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LIGHTING a candle for those who have died A most thoughtful and kindly request done, since lighting a CANDLE is the least, we can do, FOR those who have sacrificed their life and all, so THOSE of us can live in a better place.Let's remember those WHO have died in all the wars, who, HAVE fought so bravely in the name of peace & freedom and DIED.Let's never forget it and so let's pray for World peace. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp200 copyright@2005 October,19,2014

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Gary Bateman

Date: 10/20/2014 9:06:00 PM

"D" . . . I really like this one!! As you may already know (I think I told you earlier), I'm a veteran, a retired U.S Army Officer -- and so your poem here and the words have tremendous impact and meaning for me. My father was a WWII vet and my brother is a Vietnam vet, and I served as a Commander in Berlin when it was a walled city on "Freedom's Frontier" as they used to say here in Germany before the fall of The Wall. God Bless you and Amen to you on this write. A "7" -- YES!! Cheers, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/23/2015 12:25:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, Gary,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Tim Smith

Date: 10/20/2014 5:45:00 PM

Love this Dorian...Love the form too...I have done one before as well....hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/23/2015 12:25:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, Tim,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D