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Light The Page- Bright And Dull

What
happened
to you friend?
Your eyes are not
bright

Your
Pupils
aren't shining
they look very
dull.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/11/2019 2:18:00 AM
If you substitute "teacher" for friend, it makes another poem, and also wonderful.
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:35:00 PM
Great contrast of the two words, dear Alexis!!
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Date: 3/5/2019 1:21:00 PM
Alexis, I will try one of these Lanterne poems some day, just for fun, and send it to you on soup mail to see if it makes sense or not! Really love your poetic agility which always produces gems. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:42:00 PM
Omg Jennifer, Thank you so much for such a comment. I just found out about this form, I am no expert. But I appreciate all that you say about my poetry. With that being said, your poetry is amazing and I can learn a lot from you. Poetry hugs my poetic friend:-) Alexis
Date: 3/5/2019 6:06:00 AM
Witty dearest, Alexis!
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:51:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, It's always a pleasure when you stop by to visit me my friend:-)Alexis
Date: 3/4/2019 6:55:00 PM
Ooh, well done; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:50:00 PM
Hi M.L. Thanks for such an awesome comment:-)Alexis
Date: 3/4/2019 6:16:00 PM
Very good contrasting images, well done!
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:48:00 PM
Hi Michelle, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment:-) Alexis
Date: 3/4/2019 2:38:00 PM
I am not familiar with this form. It seems challenging Alexis. You conveyed your message beautifully in your poem. : ) xxoo
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:47:00 PM
Hi Connie, I appreciate you saying that. However you are such an amazing poet and believe you can master in form. Thank you so much for stopping by:-) Alexis
Date: 3/3/2019 5:08:00 PM
Just getting to grips with this form You've done it well Alexis. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:45:00 PM
Hi Tom, I really appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
Date: 3/3/2019 2:25:00 PM
You did well with lanterne.
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:44:00 PM
Hi Victor, I appreciate you saying that my friend:-) Alexis
Date: 3/3/2019 12:13:00 PM
- Lovely and touching, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:43:00 PM
Hi Anne- Lise, Thanks for such a comment and for being the first to comment:-) Alexis