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Light the Page- Bright and Dull

What happened to you friend? Your eyes are not bright Your Pupils aren't shining they look very dull.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2019 2:18:00 AM

If you substitute "teacher" for friend, it makes another poem, and also wonderful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2019 5:35:00 PM

Great contrast of the two words, dear Alexis!!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/5/2019 1:21:00 PM

Alexis, I will try one of these Lanterne poems some day, just for fun, and send it to you on soup mail to see if it makes sense or not! Really love your poetic agility which always produces gems. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:42:00 PM

Omg Jennifer, Thank you so much for such a comment. I just found out about this form, I am no expert. But I appreciate all that you say about my poetry. With that being said, your poetry is amazing and I can learn a lot from you. Poetry hugs my poetic friend:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/5/2019 6:06:00 AM

Witty dearest, Alexis!

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:51:00 PM

Hi Demetrios, It's always a pleasure when you stop by to visit me my friend:-)Alexis

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/4/2019 6:55:00 PM

Ooh, well done; good luck in the contest.

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:50:00 PM

Hi M.L. Thanks for such an awesome comment:-)Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/4/2019 6:16:00 PM

Very good contrasting images, well done!

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:48:00 PM

Hi Michelle, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2019 2:38:00 PM

I am not familiar with this form. It seems challenging Alexis. You conveyed your message beautifully in your poem. : ) xxoo

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:47:00 PM

Hi Connie, I appreciate you saying that. However you are such an amazing poet and believe you can master in form. Thank you so much for stopping by:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/3/2019 5:08:00 PM

Just getting to grips with this form You've done it well Alexis. Good luck. Tom

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:45:00 PM

Hi Tom, I really appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2019 12:13:00 PM

- Lovely and touching, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:43:00 PM

Hi Anne- Lise, Thanks for such a comment and for being the first to comment:-) Alexis