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Life's Journey - Word Acrostic Contest

(if you need a friend) If you walk the road of darkness You must hold your head up high Need the warmth of the sunshine A-long the path that you desire Friend or foe by your side (I'm sailing right behind} I'm your conscience on your journey Sailing along your seas of doubt Right away the darkness lightens Behind you lies the road without (like a bridge over troubled waters) Like a sun burst through the mist A shaft of light pierces your dream Bridge of sighs have no tomorrow Over the love that you perceive Troubled times are soon forgotten Waters calm the tempestuous mind (i will ease your mind? I will always be your true friend Will walk along your path of hope Ease the road when it’s needed Your second sight so you can cope Mind-ful of your tortured soul Penned by Seren Roberts on February 9 2014

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Date: 4/5/2017 2:44:00 PM
One of my all time favourite records Seren - so glad to see this featured on the home page today:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/5/2017 2:48:00 PM
i am astounded they dug this one up.....Its half tidy isnt it (welsh expression) lol thanks Jan.....Seren
Date: 4/3/2017 3:03:00 PM
..your featured on the home page..enjoyxx
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Date: 4/3/2017 2:34:00 PM
So beautiful and inspiring, your words transport one to a place of deep serenity where friendship blesses hearts. A uniquely crafted piece with warm, heartfelt sentiments. Congratulations on the feature placement :-) thank you for the peaceful moment :-) lynn
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Date: 4/3/2017 2:43:00 PM
how did u dig this one out of the archives Lynn I wrote if 3 years ago... Thanks for the nice compliments,,,Seren
Date: 5/25/2014 4:05:00 PM
A really great acrostic, very creative and well-formatted. I like this.
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Date: 3/10/2014 10:23:00 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:19:00 AM
lovely Serena congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:37:00 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win. seren
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:46:00 PM
Seren, lovely way to format this wonderful poem about friendship, congratulations
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:42:00 PM
Wow. Nice layout and nicely penned. congratulations. Love,Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:36:00 PM
Excellent rendering of the theme, Seren! Good meter also. Congratulations!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2014 6:58:00 PM
thank you Roy for your comments and congratulations, I appreciate them ...Seren
Date: 3/9/2014 5:52:00 PM
Seren big congrats on your win....David
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:32:00 PM
thank you David...Seren
Date: 2/11/2014 2:29:00 AM
Seren I love how you weaved the words through the title, excellent read....David
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Date: 2/15/2014 11:53:00 PM
Thank you David....Seren
Date: 2/10/2014 6:24:00 AM
This is an excellent write Seren! I am surely impressed by your golden quill that you have so illustriously used on this glorious poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this morning! What a brilliantt poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/15/2014 11:54:00 PM
Thank you Russell for your lovely comment .....Seren

Book: Shattered Sighs