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Letting Go

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Oh, drape your arms around me like a wreath Thus, hang upon my shoulders, your concerns Together we will swim the flames beneath And plunge our fiery passion ... as it burns. * FIRST PLACE in the "Mid February 2018 Standard" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor. *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/15/2018 5:48:00 AM
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Concise, precise and perfectly formed, yet conveying sensual passion. Beautifully written, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2018 6:04:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Geoffrey - I greatly appreciate that, my friend! :-)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/18/2018 5:18:00 PM
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Hot stuff Gregory! Congratulations on your fantastic first place win with your scintillating and and passionate poem.. ~Susan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:35:00 AM
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That's so very sweet of you, Susan, I'm pleased you liked it! Blessings and thanks to you, dear friend! :-) <3
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Charlie Smith
Date: 2/18/2018 9:53:00 AM
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Bravo! well done Gregory, congratulations...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:34:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Charlie - blessings, my friend! :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/18/2018 9:29:00 AM
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Back with well deserved congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:33:00 AM
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Many kind thank you's, Line! :-) <3
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 3:09:00 PM
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Sizzling xo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:21:00 AM
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Thank you, Mo! <3
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John Lawless
Date: 2/14/2018 9:37:00 AM
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...OK, cold shower time.....Beautifully done Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:21:00 AM
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LOL - Thank you so much, John! :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/14/2018 7:26:00 AM
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Great 4-liner, Gregory. Well done.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/16/2018 2:20:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Line! :-) <3

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