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Let's Start Over

I'm cool but not worth your time I'm pretty but not a dime We had a spark but now it's gone And you have your eye on someone We were friends and it was great Now I'm a problem on your plate It doesn't matter what I say It seems to piss you off anyway You liked me at one point And would possibly date me But all that is changed because you think I'm crazy Yes I say the darnest things And yeah I'm quite sarcastic But do you really expect me to cover my words with plastic Sometimes I wish we could start over I feel we got off on the wrong foot If you really new me we'll Everything would be good Pretend we've never met And know nothing about each other I'd really like to rewrite our story And for you to draw a new cover

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 8/3/2014 6:18:00 PM
Deep, powerful write which I enjoyed reading. Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings!
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Date: 8/2/2014 9:00:00 PM
Leah, nice write my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 8/1/2014 11:10:00 PM
Powerful, inspirational write! Welcome to PoetrySoup, Leah!
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Date: 8/1/2014 2:57:00 PM
Leah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/1/2014 1:34:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Leah :) - I choose your first very well written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2014 11:28:00 PM
I enjoyed this one. Hope you get a do over!
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Date: 7/31/2014 3:40:00 PM
"To cover my words with plastic" line in this whole piece. The message in this writing is a message I wish I could suggest to a few of those who are no longer in my life. Nicely done!
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Date: 7/31/2014 3:01:00 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Leah Bowerbank
Date: 7/31/2014 3:36:00 PM
What did you think?