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Let's Remove This One Stone

Just this one stone I would ask you To please remove With a view to getting A handful of anemone Just this one stone Let’s push off With our combined strength To let the doors be a little ajar To let a wind murmur A boat anchor Weave a soft whisper In yet to be seen colors In yet to blossom sounds Let’s remove this one stone Just this one stone The camel’s zone I urge you to remove For the sake of The waiting responses In our peacock November 8, 2017

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Date: 11/17/2017 3:15:00 PM
Only your gifted pen could me visualize a camel at sea, Probir. Lol! A menagerie of colorful images. Beautifully constructed poem. Aurora bright write. Love and peace forever.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2017 8:36:00 AM
Camels roam in desert. Sheer loneliness generating from the stone of an alienation is the theme. 'A boat anchor' I have used as a metaphor for stability that one seeks. Camel at sea is an impossibility! Impossibility even surreally! ... Thank you so much ...
Date: 11/8/2017 2:22:00 PM
Well written my friend..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2017 8:09:00 PM
I am encouraged ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/8/2017 6:59:00 AM
Awesome artful words--best for a win, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/9/2017 8:12:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay ...

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