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Let Patience Be Lost

longing loving fire two hearts warming in winter under white blanket lying on soft grass buzzing freedom in silence let patience be lost

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Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 9:22:00 AM

I love this, so pleasing

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2015 11:39:00 AM

- I will choose, lying on soft grass it feels like a warm summer - Beautiful my friend Bl - (Maybe it's a friendship day today - a visit from good friends :)) - You get a 7 back from me: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/4/2015 12:02:00 PM

Many thanks from my heart my very good friend for your beautiful comment along with your 7. Yes, you are a very good friend of mine always. Loved always,bl