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Let My Lips

LET MY LIPS Let my lips divine Love On hers, just for once To place For My soul’s breath to pass Onto hers, Life her to give And Lifeless me to Stay! © Demetrios Trifiatis 01 March 2013

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/13/2013 7:51:00 AM

I have not commented??? One of your best, my dear poet.... Beautiful....filakia

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/13/2013 8:37:00 AM

Thank you dear, Eileen! Your comment gives me life!

Donna Jones

Date: 3/1/2013 1:09:00 PM

Ahhhhhhhh sweeeeeeet...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/1/2013 5:41:00 AM

This is such a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! You have impressed me with your incredible style of writing, you sure cam write those Epigrams! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/1/2013 5:58:00 AM

Dear Russell, I thank so much for your comment! You are always kind!

Ale A A

Date: 3/1/2013 4:37:00 AM

My dear Demetrios sounds like you are in love. I hope her lips do "Divine" on yours :).

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/1/2013 4:44:00 AM

Well my dear Abigale, I am always in love for it reders me immortal! Thank you very much for your comment!