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Winning Is Running

rhymed couplets Advice from the oldest in the pasture, former race horse, derby grandmaster. We are not losers let loose in the fields; we horses tell how effortless "wild" feels No jockeys here, no brutal whips. No metal bar between my lips. No braids in my tail making knots, I will never be forced into slots. No giddy crowds, no owner's frowns, All handicaps stayed at the downs. Out in the field when push comes to shove? We move aside, think nothing thereof. Winning is running, hear the steeds confess. Trophies and purses? We horses care less. For jockeys, all is lost past number three; for horses, the winning is running free. March 7, 2020

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Date: 3/7/2020 1:53:00 PM
Nice one enjoyed the read...
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Date: 3/9/2020 11:42:00 AM
thank you, Arturo, I appreciate the read and the remark.
Date: 3/7/2020 10:42:00 AM
l can 'feel' the words in your poem..Our 'race' to get through daily problems is like horse's running .Is there anything more beautiful than watching horse's run free..l want to paint them so l can look at them all the time. Jx
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Date: 3/9/2020 11:44:00 AM
Just a little personification from the horses' POV. Who knows? but I can't imagine that horses like some of the things they are put through in the racing industry. Thanks for commenting.

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