Learning To Ride..Footle-Mania

‘ Lil tyke New Bike Big deal Two wheel A crash Road rash Don't cry Re-try He rides with pride!

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/11/2009 4:49:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/9/2009 6:23:00 PM

Dear Barbara, My Barbeeg Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's April Footle Contest I think I said YOU would Win Great POEM LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2009 3:54:00 PM

Very sweet, Barbara! Love the reference to "road rash." Carolyn

Brandee Augustus

Date: 3/16/2009 1:24:00 PM

Lovely poem. Great write.

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/16/2009 3:05:00 AM

Need More .... Still Sore ... Ride & write onnnnnn , Barbara .....

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/15/2009 6:23:00 PM

One of my favs...love it

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/15/2009 6:08:00 PM

Cute! Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest! Smiles from Lolita

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/15/2009 3:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brians contest! This is adorable! Great job! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/15/2009 1:17:00 PM

YAY Barbara! Warmest congrats on your excellent win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar

Date: 3/15/2009 1:13:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. I remember those days. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the footle contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen