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Nursery Rhyme
Children's Short story (Rhyme)
Delicate white feather Blowing through the breeze, Lands with a fragile bump Amongst the Chestnut trees, Nestling in the foliage Reflecting autumn's sun, Beaming in the glory! Now the only one Along came little hands Picked you up carefully, Tickled her chubby chin So innocent, care free With delicate fingers You were weaved into her hat, A young voice heard saying "Feathers are signs of angels That is a given fact" Then a sudden gust of wind Blew the hat up in the air Excited childlike giggles, A girl with ruffled hair Swirling, turning, twirling Up, Up, Up and away Delivering signs of hope To brighten another day.

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Date: 2/6/2021 1:18:00 PM
Loving the feathers to this truly beautiful poem xxxx
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/6/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thank you. Sister. xxxx
Date: 12/20/2020 6:11:00 AM
This is truly beautiful, Jo you have captured Daisy-Lynns magic, instead of seeing sadness she saw messages xxx You are very talented xx
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/20/2020 7:22:00 AM
Thank you sis. Love you all. Xxx
Date: 10/6/2020 6:02:00 AM
Such great imagery dripped in a gentle tone!! Congratulations on your 1st Place Win, Joanna!!
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/6/2020 6:24:00 AM
Thank you, this poem just came to me, it was a pleasure to write, thank you for taking the time to read it. :-)
Date: 7/22/2020 6:35:00 AM
Nicely done rhyme, Joanna:)
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 7/24/2020 9:42:00 AM
Thank you

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