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I hope I don't scare anyone here...lol

Rid the negative waves... Hold tight...the torch that brightens the dungeons of darkness Open the windows to sunshine and let the warmth breeze in... No room for the cold The fiery cellars that entrap your soul...extinguish them forever Ya know, a little kindness never hurts If you defer, even Satan himself might show some kindness... When he greets you with open arms You've got it, god gave it...now use it Share it with others and let them share it with you... Kindness A Little Kindness Never Hurts Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brenda Chiri 11/9/2018

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Date: 11/24/2018 10:08:00 AM
old buddhist saying...kindness is every step, it turns the endless path to joy
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Date: 11/12/2018 4:06:00 PM
I second Carolyn's comment about the line, "You've got it, god gave it...now use it." That about sums up 'kindness,' the greatest quality. :) gw
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Date: 11/12/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thanks again, Gershon. It does doesn't it...truly the greatest quality. :) CM
Date: 11/10/2018 9:31:00 AM
Your powerful, engaging and expressive imagery is rousing for the heart and stirring for the soul, dear Charlieku. An impassioned and impressive poem that glows with inspiration. Loved it! Kindness is a thing of beauty and so is your insightful poem, my most charming friend. Best wishes for a win and always, warmest wishes and hugs for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/12/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comments, Susan. Your poetic comments glow even more than my poems. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words and wishes..You always bring a smile to my face...Ty :) Warmest wishes, love & hugs my dear friend ~Charlieku :)
Date: 11/10/2018 8:48:00 AM
I laughed aloud when I got to the part about Satan greeting you with open arms. Ha! Loved the entire thing. You are onto something delightfully headed toward a win.
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Date: 11/12/2018 7:54:00 PM
LOL...I must admit I like that part too. Thank you, Caren.. for your kind thoughts.
Date: 11/10/2018 12:34:00 AM
Well it scared me! ...talking about Satan welcoming me with open arms and all!! Geeeezzz Charlie!! Do you think he will show me a little kindness?? How about you? lolol
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Date: 11/12/2018 7:56:00 PM
Oops, you are one person I didn't want to scare..lol But you have nothing to be scared about, The only one who will be greeting you with open arms is the lord. Hugs// Charlie xo
Date: 11/9/2018 4:04:00 PM
And the thing is Charlie it costs nothing. Well written. Good luck. Tom.
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/12/2018 7:57:00 PM
The best things in life are free! Thank you, Tom. Charlie
Date: 11/9/2018 4:04:00 PM
I love your unique take on the kindness theme, good luck in the contest charles:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, and thank you, Jan. Hugs // Charlie xx
Date: 11/9/2018 3:03:00 PM
love this thought-provoking piece
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/12/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, Jack. Quite thought-provoking lol
Date: 11/9/2018 1:56:00 PM
- Lovely written, Charlie :) - Good luck in the contest - Have a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2018 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Was busy this weekend, so have a wonderful week-beginning lol hugs // Charlie :)
Date: 11/9/2018 1:22:00 PM
Love the imagery, great inspirational write.
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/12/2018 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Date: 11/9/2018 12:31:00 PM
As long as we've got you around, Charles, there will always be something to smile about.
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/9/2018 12:41:00 PM
A beautiful comment, from a beautiful friend. Thank you Lawrence, that put a smile on my face :) Have a great weekend. Sending love your way.
Date: 11/9/2018 11:57:00 AM
Charles, it must be a joy to spend time with someone who thinks the way you do. This is beautifully written and my favorite line is "You've got it, god gave it...now use it." Indeed, that is what we should do! Best wishes for success in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/9/2018 12:18:00 PM
Oh my, Carolyn. It's not every day I get a compliment like that. Thank you so much for your absolutely beautiful words to me. It is a joy to me to share my thoughts with you and this remarkable world of fantastic poets. Blessing to you my dear friend. Have a beautiful weekend. Sending love & hugs :) Charlie
Date: 11/9/2018 11:45:00 AM
Well said, Charlie and I predict this verse will be a top winner in the Contest - Bob
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/9/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging words, Bob. Sure is great to see you my friend. Have a blessed weekend. Charlie

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