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It’s Kevin, and I am NOT home alone. I’m in Miami with my family. Just talked to Buzz, my brother, on the phone; and like last year, he’s angry as can be. I AM a brat sometimes, but Buzz is worse. Twice now, we’ve had to leave the brute behind. He causes trouble. Then he’ll grumble, curse, and blame me. He is grown, but not his mind. When we get home will he tell some wild tale? Last year he said persistent burglars came, but he outsmarted them. They went to jail. While we have a fun, he’s stuck there. What a shame! Next year will Buzz AGAIN sit home alone, make up outrageous narratives, and moan? Movie, Home Alone 2; character speaking, Kevin McCallister January 8, 2019, entered in Gregory Barden's Movie Magic contest

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Date: 1/9/2019 11:39:00 AM
What a great movie you chose, Janice! Love the way you have Kevin switching places with his brother and poking fun at the wild tales the brother told the last time he was left "Home Alone." You've captured the movie's humor very well and your meter flows perfectly. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/9/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thank you for this GREAT comment, Carolyn! Janice
Date: 1/9/2019 6:54:00 AM
Hi Janice, Clever - lots of luck - sounds like a winner to me! Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/9/2019 7:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer. Janice
Date: 1/9/2019 1:10:00 AM
Nice twist Janice, just watched again at Christmas, its becoming a firm favourite at holiday time. Good luck. Tom.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/9/2019 8:08:00 AM
I LOVE both movies! Thanks, Tom. Janice

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