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Keep It Raw

Keep it raw means keep it real If it ain't rough, then it ain't raw If it ain't raw, then it ain't real Now are you starting to feel what I feel Keeping it raw means don't be no vegetable Don't be a lettuce head getting tossed in a ghetto salad bowl Please don't be misled by every wind that blow Please don't go to sleep outside in the blizzard snow Keeping it real means don't be no fruit loop Don't be a tomato head getting stewed in a suburban salad soup Stay raw to the changes bruising your skin, checkout of the fantasy land you been living in Black be the clothes of funeral blues And if you're poor, more newly minted problems is just old news Keep it real, keep it raw Right now, frozen progress ain't on the thaw Keep it raw, keep it real Those jacked civil rights is falling back down that slippery Capitol Hill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/27/2017 10:08:00 AM
Real or raw or just plain getting with it, this one hits hard my friend. Though there is a bright side...we are soupheads and happily, freedom of speech still exists on this site.
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Date: 4/27/2017 9:59:00 AM
Wowzer dis got tha power!
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Date: 4/27/2017 8:55:00 AM
I am not a lettuce head. I learn from you every day, by reading your poems. And that is great. I am eager to learn, and to change my views where needed.
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Date: 4/26/2017 11:20:00 PM
I liked this Freddie, but keep it raw for me also means, keep it real, no matter the color, the race the status, lets all embrace!!!!! We as writers especially can climb higher than any hill, no matter how capital!!!! :) Cheers!
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Date: 4/26/2017 11:01:00 PM
Well, if ya don't learn something new every day, RW! I never knew that! Great pen again my friend! Keep it raw mate!
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