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K. S. { Broken Monoku }

beneath coral depths reefbed the mother of all pearls

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 5:06:00 PM

good luck inthe contest, this is a nice read,..p.d.

Date: 5/1/2010 1:40:00 PM

Good use of imagery for an uplifting view. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Hope you are feeling better. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 5/1/2010 6:49:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Katherine.Rgds Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2010 6:46:00 AM

I get a hidden message from this one..Those coral reefs are so beautifully colored but are razor sharp....hard to penetrate...Like someone with an outer protective barrier but inside if allowed to come forth would be a Mother Of Pearl...Great write...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/1/2010 5:53:00 AM

Appreciate as I have first hand experience at lover's quarrels and being shattered..but now is not the case.. and to write so early on a Saturday ..oh my... thankxxx for your encouragement and support and good luck with the coral reef description as well..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"