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Just a Beautiful Day - the Curtal Sonnet Style

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~Just A Beautiful Day~ (Curtal Sonnet) Its dawn and I see the bright sun come out And in the morning its tender arms still the night, Breakin' the gloom as its light descends the clouds, As sunshine extends all her fingers about; And grass and trees cleanses with its bright light, As its glow, keeps climbing the sky so blue It seems to be sweeping all the gray clouds ‘way, As ev'r so gently they move on their own a'cord, Swirling and dancin' as they go ‘round the sun, And I see the birds soaring above the trees Well,it seems,this day will be full of fun. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2008 October.21.2015

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Date: 10/21/2015 11:52:00 PM
- Really beautiful poem, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/23/2015 1:16:00 PM
Thank you so kindly Anne-Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate your visit and your very kind comments, and all so very much my very dear friend.I'm so glad that you liked this one Anne.You're always so sweet and kind! And I hope that all is well with you Anne.Sending you love and prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always! Hugs!:)D

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