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June Reflection

It’s Saturday and I’m lying on the grass on a hot June afternoon. I hear no sounds except for those of nature. Most folks, I surmise, are tucked away in their air-conditioned homes (if not out shopping or enjoy family recreation), for I see nobody else in sight. Alone in the bliss of peacefulness, I look upward. cauliflower clouds - their sprawling backdrop . . . crayola blue As I watch the clouds slowly drift and meld into one another, I recall as a child lying by my mother as she pointed out to me and my sisters the clouds and how they appeared to be changing into wooly animals! To think I once had time to just lie back on green grass that way, watching cloud formations with family! How long ago it all seems! Absorbing nature now, I am a child again, and I watch as a butterly drifts by. On the fence, a dragonfly now takes residence, and I am mellow like sun and wind. summer’s hum. . . a ladybug hugs my arm Written last Saturday. Posted 6/29/18 for Mick Talbot's Haibun Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/13/2018 6:15:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. I so admire those who 'find' the time for the important things in life. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/7/2018 5:21:00 PM
Ahh!! Great descriptive work. Brings back memories of childhood but even as a child I did not enjoy the heat of summer. I remember how hot it would be lying on the grass watching the clouds. I still enjoy looking at them inside an air conditioned car or truck riding along the road or just parked with the AC on. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara
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Date: 7/7/2018 11:53:00 AM
Very nice.
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Date: 7/7/2018 7:14:00 AM
Last but first, your win, for from the bottom my contestants' comments I did begin. All thirty-four read at my leisure, the closer to the end the greater the pleasure. And hey I cast no aspersions all were good but some were better, Yours Andrea topped them all, thank you for the privilege of reading, my congratulations you are now receiving, Mick
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Date: 7/6/2018 11:48:00 PM
Congrats! Well deserved! A great memory watching the changing shapes of clouds.
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Date: 7/6/2018 10:15:00 PM
Great imagery, Andrea! Congratulations on your win...Charlie
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Date: 7/6/2018 9:22:00 PM
Back with Big Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/6/2018 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Enjoyed reading this beautiful haibun. Your imagery of nature is calming to read. Well done!
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Date: 7/6/2018 1:31:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on first place in Mick's contest, with this beautifully penned Haibun, well done !
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Date: 7/6/2018 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea, this was a pleasure to read so well written. :))
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Date: 7/5/2018 4:22:00 PM
so good to hear you still do this - childhood magic is only lost if we let it be lost. always sad to see humans down-faced watching electronics when the sky blazes mysteries above. Congrats of course
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Date: 7/5/2018 4:11:00 PM
Very nice images, Andrea! Enjoyed! Congrats on first place!
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Date: 7/3/2018 11:00:00 PM
You seem to be drifting down memory lane...
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Date: 7/2/2018 3:56:00 PM
Lovely to connect with nature by just being there and getting lost in the sounds and movement. The sudden awareness of the lady bug broke the reverie in a perfect finale. Good Luck in the Contest. SuZ
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Date: 7/2/2018 7:03:00 AM
A soothing feel is delivered in the nostalgic thoughts that drift gentle as the clouds in your write. I related, grew bittersweet responses for those innocent memories of giving myself to sky watching, but in the end I giggled with innocent glee to have a ladybug's hug. Such a joy to spend time inside this write. Love to you ... CayCay
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Date: 7/1/2018 6:26:00 AM
I just had to read this Andrea, and not disappointed either..i love the clouds also, Islands floating in a deep blue see, your haibun, touches me, it is beautiful.
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Date: 6/30/2018 10:54:00 PM
A beautiful haibun that shares the calm of nature and how it restores the energy centers of the body Andrea. I enjoyed this very much. When I first began to read I pictured a ladybug in my mind and smiled when I got to your ending. : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/30/2018 12:55:00 PM
Dear Andrea This is a beautiful piece. I was inspired today and wrote a short story this morning. I hope you remember me in your prayers as I have been so ill that it was almost the end for me. I was supposed to teach ESL this summer but was not able to. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/30/2018 5:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this reflective poem..wonderful recall of pleasant memories..peaceful and serene..well done, Andrea.
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Date: 6/30/2018 3:58:00 AM
WOW... Amazing Haibun, Andrea. A blissful environment.Enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing this peaceful poetry. Such a pleasure to read.
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Date: 6/29/2018 10:48:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:30:00 PM
Andrea, another well crafted, creative write!
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:59:00 PM
This is so relaxing and descriptive. A smile comes to my face as I can recall my experience similar to your words. I'm sure so many can relate as well. hugs
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:11:00 PM
Nicely crafted Andrea...I can smell the peacefulness in your writing...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/29/2018 12:10:00 PM
A sweet and peaceful tune reminding not to miss out on the simple beauty life has to offer
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