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Juliet

Juliet, so pure of face and form today Countenance as innocent as morning dew But beneath the surface her own fears at play No one knows the sorrow she is going through She loved him but now that he has gone away In her heart the sunny days have turned to gray She will never let anyone know her pain In time perhaps she will learn to love again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2014 9:55:00 PM
nice win Barbara ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:42:00 PM
Thanks for the understanding me so deeply, Barbara. ; ) Congrats!
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Date: 2/18/2014 4:26:00 PM
A touching rispetto. I've not done a rispetto to my remembrance. Congratulations on your win. The innocent countenance has a will of steel not to share her pain; I can relate to that characterization.
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Date: 2/18/2014 1:50:00 PM
enjoyed this Barbara congrats on win hugs
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Date: 2/18/2014 9:04:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2014 5:46:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Juliet and congrats on the win, barbara
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Date: 2/17/2014 9:49:00 PM
You say so very much with so few words. Beautiful! Chris
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Date: 2/17/2014 5:35:00 PM
Well liked by me. Your opening lines create such a charming picture. The story is very complex for the few lines that contain it. Keep them coming!
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:13:00 AM
love this touching write, Barbara - it deserves to be a big winner
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Date: 1/30/2014 10:38:00 PM
This is a painful and sad write, but there is a glimmer of hope at the end! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:38:00 PM
This is a pure joy to read it is sad and romantic at the same time loved it's sweet devotion of emotion. thanks for your comments also dear. Have a great night. cheri
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:28:00 PM
Ahh!! Emotive and descriptive about the picture for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..You came up with delightful expressions to describe Juliet..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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Date: 1/30/2014 4:08:00 PM
this is really nice, Barbara. Is it for the love contest?
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/30/2014 4:19:00 PM
Gorelick Date: 1/30/2014 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry Its for Isaiah's contest..Juliet...One of the picture contests. I guess it doesn't make a lot of sense if you don't know that...lol. How are you? Reply

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