Jubilee

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written in lots of 5777 three times number of the jubilee year

unrhymed quatrains

Superior Lord heavenly temple I kneel before You Master bowing show me the path to serve truth Chaos has gripped hearts out of the depths I cry God Good council hope holds the flame within mercy sings out peace There is forgiveness marked with contents wrapped Holy burning oil of your incense fragrant whispers beckoning

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2018 4:52:00 AM

- Lovely written, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/24/2018 5:08:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' oustanding, spiritual poem filled of abundant faith, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.I enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of pure gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do , Liam!:)Take always very good care of yourself in all!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Donna Loughman

Date: 1/24/2018 4:42:00 PM

Amen...5,7,7 7, Jublie structure unusual concept in writing...lovely tribute to our Lord... :-)