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Journey's End-Rich

Journey' End Seeing Franklin in the Music City I realised it is my journey's end If the goddess of wealth would rain money and generosities I would live in Franklin with my three daughter's families One is already living there, moving in with two more would be easier A place has value only because of people residing there I would buy my own cottage with a flowery arbour With three other cottages around for our utopia Near Jackson Lake with ducks gliding for my grandchildren to enjoy A country that gives way to an ambulance and won't let you die Even in the remotest place is a country that cares for your life The roads are broad and smooth where your bones don't rattle with bumps Windows are without wire meshes and nature is crystal clear Can see the beauty with the naked eye without obstruction Clean grocery from round the globe sans cheating Friendly faces eager to help, soothing to the heart and eye Walking down the arcades a wave, a greeting and a smile Being moneyed I would charter an inflow of loved ones to my utopia The mesmerising autumn colours made me want life to just stop The freshness in the air is all so energetic and rejuvenating The week end trekking trails, yachting and exploring New experiences experimenting to enliven life in all its spheres All these add-ons make life worth living, more value In my next life I wish to be born here with happiness abounding I'm sure god listens to the hearts ticking away their time! SECOND Balveen Cheema October 27, 2015 Contest: If You Had The Money Where Would You Like To Live And Why? Sponsor: Mystic Rose * This poem is specially written for my daughter who lives there as an expression of my love to be with her always.

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Date: 11/17/2015 4:43:00 AM
Very beautiful write Balveen.. no wonder a winner.. big congrats!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/20/2015 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 11/16/2015 12:22:00 AM
Balveen, congrats... SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 5:14:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 11/16/2015 12:07:00 AM
Balveen a really neat poem. You never know the world and destiny can be a bizarre combination sometimes. Like all dreams sometimes they happen. Good luck and congratulations on you fab win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 5:17:00 AM
Touché! Your words are sprinkling magic on my utopia, Mark!
Date: 11/15/2015 8:56:00 PM
Excellent Balveen, congratulations, you are truly rich!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 5:19:00 AM
Richard, how very kind of you to say so! A really very beautiful thought!
Date: 11/15/2015 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 5:20:00 AM
Thanks Eve! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/15/2015 2:22:00 PM
Balveen, congrats on your win:-) Alexis
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 5:21:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/15/2015 1:06:00 PM
I am sure your daughters miss you so much - a lovely poem Balveen:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 5:23:00 AM
Thanks Jan! I, too miss them! There is no lie in the fact that the heart would love all to stay close by. Love, Balveen
Date: 10/27/2015 8:07:00 AM
Balveena, beautiful pictures displayed but we have the choice to be happy always!I enjoyed the read.. =`)!~Olive Eloisa
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/27/2015 8:15:00 AM
Ofcourse we do! I enjoy every bit of work I do ( much to the envy of others-as they openly proclaim!) and have lived peacefully and happily! I wrote it for my daughter who lives there-to show how much I miss her. Love, Balveen
Date: 10/26/2015 10:52:00 PM
Balveen, you have a wonderful and thoughtful way of spending your incoming journey. Enjoyed. LINDA
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Date: 10/26/2015 11:06:00 PM
Yes, if only. :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 11:00:00 PM
Linda, if only..... If wishes were horses, beggars would ride them. Love, Balveen

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