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Jesse Cold

Childish playful, maziness heart. . . . A loving touch of lovely art; Won't you see the sweetly trimm'd Everlasting heart been dimm'd? Lovely heart been tucked away Cutting edges, day by day Cov'ring the soul, so brightly lit. . . . With veiling that's so tightly fit But light pours out the lurid sea, Inside your heart shushed silently Hold on to fading gasps of love And all the sweet your heart dreams of

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/2/2011 6:00:00 PM
Very lovely Couplet. Enjoyed reading immensely Always, Laura
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:35:00 PM
Lovely rhymes in your Couplet, nice flow to your poem's rhythm, Danna. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/23/2011 1:20:00 PM
:)
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Date: 10/23/2011 11:15:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words, you are a talented poet, too. Good luck!
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Date: 10/23/2011 8:00:00 AM
I adore your writing, almost as much as I adore you.
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:53:00 PM
Do u now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Book: Shattered Sighs