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Jan Allison's - Fun Pyramid Cruise

Jan Allison's - Fun Pyramid Cruise Rolling shores of sugar form on crimsoned lands Tan children run through cinnamon granules between their toes Crunchy warm, doing soccer flips, glowing orange with the sun Cascading sugar crystals wave good-byes The yellow waves, light on honey oceans rise Jan Allison's new Pyramid Cruise Lines launches The flag ship, Gold Pyramid, to everyone’s delight On honey sun and honey moon it sails Glitters on golden Pyramid and sea It lifts into the sky, one hundred floors high Each deck with fewer cabins to form a shape The ship is the first of its kind Built in the perfect image of a pyramid with diamond top To the top which rises to a clear crystalline ball room Jan dances their at night A dozen roses on center table in her room Three white ones, 2 bright red and purple And let’s not forget the brilliant yellow roses Sent by every friend, from them to her With warm wishes for a wondrous maiden voyage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/24/2014 3:26:00 PM
Wow, wow, wow Earl, I have to fav this one.
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/24/2014 4:49:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. Jan liked it also. It was a fun write. I appreciate your comments. Have a nice evening. Earl
Date: 11/22/2014 3:03:00 PM
I would definitely be on that boat. Nicely written Earl.
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/22/2014 6:35:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thanks for commenting. Glad you liked it. I like Jan's idea. We would call it cruising with the Soup Cruise. Have a great week end. Earl
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2014 4:44:00 PM
oh wouldn't it be fun to have a soup party on it Brenda! Hugs jan xxx
Date: 11/22/2014 11:32:00 AM
When i saw the title I had to read this.... WOW WOW WOW I was so flattered to see this poem is about moi:-) amazing imagery - it is simply charming Earl thank you!!! a 7 and faves I LOVE IT!!! hugs jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2014 1:08:00 PM
I went on a cruise in 2006 - Costa Concordia when it was 6 months old - will be a while before i cruise again after what happened to that ship:-( hugs jan xx
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/22/2014 1:01:00 PM
Hi Jan. Thank you. It was my pleasure. I had to sleep on it to work out the images just right. I'm glad you liked it. I am a man of my word. I said that I would write a happy poem for you after I wrote that lollipop poem. There are no pyramid shaped ships on the oceans. One day there will be. I hope you get to enjoy them when they come into being. Have a great week end. Earl

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