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It's So Sweet

Your heartbeat; Music to my ears And it's so sweet It takes away all fears It's just so sweet To love someone so dear It's just so sweet to feel a heart so near

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/8/2011 9:48:00 AM

Dana'lynn, this one is very sweet indeed and love the shape you've given it:) Thanks Dana'lynn for your lovely comments on Anticipation. It's snowing (again! lol) here right now although there's just this feeling of spring within today and it flowed out onto the page:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2010 8:33:00 AM

A few words to let you know I have read your poetry today and enjoyed it Dana'lynn. I hope to read many more of your poems in 2011. Wishing you a New Year filled with good health , love, and amazing inspiration. May your writing endeavors become all that you have wished for. HAPPY NEW YEAR. Love, Carol

Helen Forber

Date: 12/29/2010 7:42:00 AM

Dana’ Lynn, All your poems; I have read have a lovely rhyming quality to them and are a joy to read. Thank you for your comment on my own poem. Love Hel.

William Kershaw

Date: 12/28/2010 3:41:00 PM

Dana'lynn, clever and sweet, this one is a treat and can't be beat! Loved this. Love, Will