It May Take

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IT MAY TAKE

It may take us a lifetime our castle of happiness to build but only a moment to demolish! © Demetrios Trifiatis 31 January 2017

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Chris Green

Date: 1/31/2017 10:24:00 AM

Now isn't that the truth. Wow, this was a great line Demetrios.

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/31/2017 8:11:00 AM

Wonderful write ... So truly said ... Indeed great ...

White Wolf

Date: 1/31/2017 8:02:00 AM

We must always kick our own foundations every day! A great monoku my friend, and so true!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/31/2017 8:25:00 AM

Yes dear, White Wolf, every day we have to examine our inner foundations before anything else because everything is built upon them! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2017 4:07:00 AM

- A signature on a document ... a world in turmoil - Whatever foundation ... everything can be destroyed, with power -Some know only their own happiness - They have a huge ego ... - A line that gives big words, my friend - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/31/2017 8:23:00 AM

You are so right dear, Anne-Lise, as things are it will take millennia before something good happens. Thank you! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2017 4:12:00 AM

- Is there really anyone who believe that this world will be better in the nearest future? ... Sorry ... I just have to ask