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An Invisible Girl

I dwell behind a high stone wall not visible except in my soul, where veils of misty haze fill the corridors of my mind, and my innermost thoughts are silently beautiful and full of weeping. Some days, I just want to be unseen, prowling and creeping inside my own head to ponder and contemplate- oh, I am but a tiny speck in the vast universe of time, I am like a fragment detached, floating, drifting, swirling eternally in the deep blue sea of my imagination . Glorious and painful is the aloneness of being invisible, hidden, withdrawn from life, just residing behind my high stone wall- where I lift my invisible pen to write poems in invisible ink. _____________________ February 16, 2017 Poetry/Acrostic/An Invisible Girl Copyright Protected, ID 17- 876-744-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 2/28/2017 10:24:00 AM
This is beautiful writing Constance, should have placed in my opinion, was one of the best, oh well each judge has their own criteria.
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Date: 2/19/2017 1:45:00 AM
Very visible ink I should think. Why does it often have to be so painful to pen beautiful poems? Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/17/2017 12:17:00 AM
Hard to rhyme if you forgot the last line..best wishes in the contest BW...
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2017 7:05:00 PM
Charlie thanks for visiting
Date: 2/16/2017 9:53:00 PM
Great poem, I especially love the ending, Constance. Writing poems in invisible ink is such a powerful image! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2017 7:11:00 PM
Agnes thanks for visiting and the nice comment
Date: 2/16/2017 8:02:00 PM
VERY cool, Constance. Love how you picked up invisible ink at the end of it! YOu are on the ball with contests, and I am now falling behind again!!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2017 7:12:00 PM
Andrea thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment

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