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Instants of Presence

what of me? this whirlwind smeared across time falling and churning instants strung together futures approaching never appearing before disintegrating into pasts and finally dying -- the whirlwind spent. and what of the Creature that is All? the great One that doesn’t Be-come. i pity It. It that can only Be.

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Date: 5/1/2014 3:57:00 PM
YOU ARE THE BEST POET I have seen in a long while..... AMAZING WRITING... I love your style and I love your poetry... B
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/1/2014 7:31:00 PM
He Is My Love thats the name of it.. its my latest..
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/1/2014 7:30:00 PM
hey Sam I just wrote this one.. see what you think.. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet_read.aspx?ID=51120
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/1/2014 4:14:00 PM
Brooke, I am spellbound. I don't know what to say. Except that I am glad we have met. And that I look forward to us getting to know each other and our poetry! Peace..Sam
Date: 4/28/2014 1:17:00 PM
Good Morning Sam, "I wonder what continues to possess this presence." hopefuly it's not a state of being.. Great write.. Interesting... I'm gonna re-read the poem again.... XOX..Linda
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Date: 4/28/2014 1:17:00 PM
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Date: 4/28/2014 10:00:00 AM
That creature is lost within itself isn't it..Enjoyed reading your work that speaks of truth..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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