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Inspired By Rico Blanco

You suffocate me with the best feeling Of the words sinking deep into my core This method makes your soul too revealing Leading me to be found wanting you more. Wonder where you muster such disclosure Thin-skinned symmetry sparks with translation Your fluency shakes my stern composure Testament of substance brings sensation. Occurrence of the ripened heart patterns Along with the rhythm of craft and flaws Expressing in phrases how it matters Enough odds and ends to give me such cause. A smile is out of control to appear But a burden is left as souvenir. Surrendering to you is admission How weak my limbs and blind sanity are Thought being with you is an ambition Even so, I thirst for something bizarre. Move me with your narrative, I don’t mind I will never be caught dead on your feet Might be without depth as others may find Yet this obsession grants me a pure treat. I guess this is the way to match your taste Embracing the gray matter around you Toxic as it seems, the risk has been placed Hopeful to keep my passion to pursue. Never in my life have I been so sure That this is a touch I have to endure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 3/23/2016 10:08:00 PM
Maria, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:07:00 PM
Maria, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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