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Inhaling the Sea - Lovers In the Lap of Nature

"Inhaling the sea -- Lovers in the lap of nature" Inhaling the sea, She primed my heart!! Early morning going onto the sea bed, My chubby cheeks blushed in red. Inhaling the breeze, felt so fresh, By that time, Remembered my Longlasting mesh. That salubrious weather, those scenic charm, Wanted you to be forever in my glorious arm. Ravishing beauty kept my eyes off. In this pictersque environment, Everything all around was happening. Yes, This was the place where l wed. Inhaling the sea, feelings came out from the deep space of my heart. This is the place where diara and I met for the first time. She primed my heart. Embedded mountains, Turquoise blue lake, Don't want to be under impression which was fake. Ocean of dreams I had, But she don't entertained me that was sad. But still, She was the Queen of hills of my heart. Morning exercise was only the reason, Meeting each other every season. Waves reached to its height, She use to hug me tight. With the rising sun and falling sunrise. Holding her from her back, Beyond imagination, carried precious moments in my sack. Trying to cope up long miles of relationship. Friction in my soul, asked me to commit for marriage. Emotionally connecting the extreme ends. Feelings of each other bloomed. Hugging her, strings of heart played in beats. Felt so blessed, gave me a feeling of stardom. Twilight walk on sea beach, Soft rays of sun, Filling empty heart with joy. Sweetness of breeze, Blueness of sky. Wide flowing beach, Along with a pretty attractive beauty in peach. Ohhh my icy sugar, You melt my heart. In an eternal winter, Frozen soul wrapped each other. God blessed and she tagged me as her kite runner. Ohhh my Frankastein, I have got dipped in you. Red sky view, Flying colour of sun and relaxed mind, Stunning beauty, I am sinked in your lovely eyes. Best splendid moments I had being with you. Holding your hand had made a peace and harmony of our feeling. Yes inhaling the sea, She primed my heart!! By Madhavi

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Date: 4/1/2014 2:39:00 AM
congratulations madhavi xx
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 4/9/2014 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Mandy :)
Date: 4/1/2014 2:05:00 AM
Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, madhavi
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 4/9/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Dr.Ram.
Date: 3/31/2014 9:39:00 PM
MADHAVI, AWESOME WIN..... CONGRATULATIONS..... LUV~ LINDA
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 4/9/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thanks P.D. :)
Date: 3/22/2014 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win for your latest poem, Madhavi
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/23/2014 7:29:00 AM
Hi Dr.Ram, Thanks sir for appreciating my work.. ##mads
Date: 3/22/2014 7:29:00 AM
- Nice to read your "Latest Poem" in the contest sponsored by: Leonora Galinta :) - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, MADHAVI ! - Will also wish you an enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/23/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Anne, thanks baby..for appreciating my work..happy weekend to you too dear.. ©©mads
Date: 3/22/2014 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on this great write and win my dear friend. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your precious gem. Thank u so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest. Big warm hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/23/2014 7:28:00 AM
Hi leonara, Its been my pleasure dear..I enjoyed participating in your contest.. Thanks a lot for appreciating my work and made me win in ur contest.. Hugs.. ##mads

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