Ingenue - Pleiades

Innocent, fresh-faced girl, iris blooming in spring - illuminated soft in dawn’s honey-spooned glow. Impressionable soul inspired by worlds unknown, I, too, was once like you.

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/4/2017 3:18:00 PM

Captures the artist's work perfectly. Not easy winding poetic expression around the constraints of a Pleides. Nicely done Rhonda and congratulations on your well deserved win! :-)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/2/2017 10:22:00 AM

Words as beautiful as the painting! A well-deserved first place win! A-7 for sure! Hugs. Pandita

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/1/2017 6:43:00 PM

Beautiful, Rhoda. Love the last line. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2017 5:01:00 PM

oh so beautiful Rhonda! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/1/2017 3:33:00 PM

Beautiful Pleiades, Rhonda! Congrats on your well deserved win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2017 3:23:00 PM

Yes, I remember this one. It was one of my favorites as well as Kim's!! Congrats.

Roy Pett

Date: 3/1/2017 11:30:00 AM

Congratulations Rhonda, lovely Pleiades, well deserved win :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/1/2017 10:33:00 AM

An amazing write, Rhonda! Beautifully written and a creative topic. I love your last line that turns it nostalgic. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim