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In the Secret Place,

In the secret place where they can stay beautiful, where Donna and her son Zeus can stay young forever, where there is no more pain, sorrow and fear. In the secret place where Donna and Zeus can look down on us like angles; and protect us like beautiful angles like they were on earth, but now in heaven. In the secret place where we will see them again which the secret place is call The City. Where the roads are gold the bridge is wonderful the sky is blue the clouds are white and the gate is gold. Where the grass is green the flowers are so beautiful, and angles in white wings are flying in the sky. And there are lots of mansions and people are happy smiling. And loving each other not hating one another in The City. The City that is call heaven where God holds out his hands and I hear him say well done my faithful servant you can come on in. We shall see you both again mommy sweet princess and my handsome Zeus we will always love you both and you shall always be remember in or dreams and in our hearts. To a true warrior princess Donna mommy’s brave hero!!! Isaiah 43:2 “When you pass through the waters, I will be with you; and when you pass through the rivers, they will not sweep over you. When you walk through the fire, you will not be burned; the flames will not set you ablaze.” Romans 8:18 “I consider that our present sufferings are not worth comparing with the glory that will be revealed in us.” Revelation 21:4 “ ‘He will wipe every tear from their eyes. There will be no more death’ or mourning or crying or pain, for the old order of things has passed away.” This poem is by Katrina Burrell Donna Burrell mother,

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Date: 10/27/2016 5:13:00 PM
Katrina B.,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/19/2016 7:51:00 PM
Katrina, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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