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In the Mist

Mist, envelopes the dark water’s sharp edge Developed sipping the waves of dimness Triumphant droplets carry forth in pride Over the hardships of combined starkness Sojourn the time has become real in might Shortly in the mind’s eye, it cannot see The dark realm beyond is what it is, dark Because the mist has become nothing free Corrupted the light has started to change The only small amount of light left bends And darkness covers all around this realm I am stuck now here, until light amends I lose the strength to stand up any more I fall to the depths of the frozen Earth Rolling through the mist I hope to escape Never do I find it, couldn’t find mirth May times empty chasm lift me again Out of this terror hole I fell into May the colors come alive once again Lifting veil of darkness, making it true Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/22/2014 3:23:00 PM
Hi Russell; I like this. It has mystery to it. It also sounds like a dream. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for your comment..... Lucilla
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Date: 1/19/2014 2:25:00 PM
Very well written Russell and very strong.
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Date: 1/19/2014 7:35:00 AM
Interesting work..Very expressive and emotive..If for a contest, it should do well..Thanks for the visit to my Haiku..Sara
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Date: 1/19/2014 6:45:00 AM
- A deep poem Russell - But, as always proficient written - Have a great Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2014 5:48:00 AM
Until light amends...This SO resonated with me, Russell. Who hasn't been in the misty murky darkness longing for light. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking piece. Hope all is well
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Date: 1/19/2014 4:48:00 AM
what a hopeful melody topped off with fascinating lines that revel in the light, russell...you simply amaze!.. huggs
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Date: 1/19/2014 1:13:00 AM
WHAT A FANTASTIC POEM! I really was captivated by the verse and its superb in beauty wording! Inspiring and incomparably majestic! My friend Russell, a 7 you deserve!
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